stargate Exodus

[romus]

ok its about a team called Exodus who are part of the SGC in 2041 after the orri have been defeated but there is still an orri presence in the galaxy so the SGC starts to expand there grip on the galaxy by rounding up all of the advanced technology they can incase the orri decide to make a return in the near future

The Team

colonel.marshall bauer
major.antony bridges
dr.caroline davies
alchek.(jaffa)

so SG-Exodus is sent to the planet were they found the ancient device that makes people see insects from other dimentions and dr.davies is looking around the ruins and the others are taking up defencive positions just incase they have any un-invited visiters.so the dr is lookin around the ruins trying to find a way into the building and finds some text daniel wasnt able to desipher in the short time he was there and it talks about a portal to the relm of bliss.The dr keeps trancelating the text and it reads that the ancients that once inhabited this world didnt leave but they went through the portal to another relm of supposedly paradice.Then all of a sudden an orri scout ship flies past and the colonel orders dr davies to pack up and move out....so they make it to the gate to find that its been guarded by 3 priors so the team have no choice but to go back to the ruins for cover shortly after arriving the team comes under fire by 2 orri fighter ships(dont know name will find out on SG-1)then when all seams is lost dr davies manages to open the portal to the relm of the ancients...so the team step into the portal and are instantly tranceported to the other relm.After walkin for 3 hours streight the team discovers a village were they are told that they cannot return to there relm without the help of the gate builders and they have long since left the planet...so the journey begins

can do a lot better but im tired

[romus]

crap can u move this topic for me please

[Geoff]

Yeah, sure thing.

[destinymaker]

This isn't that bad, but the Ori are you sure about that.

[romus]

no the orri are just the reason they stepped into the portal...there is a new enemy never seen by anyone before called heloks(maybe this name)wating in the shadows.

They are a very advanced race who dominate this relm and use humans for hunting game and once a human in cought he becomes an incubator of there young.Then when he had been implanted by there young(im thinking in the chest kind of area)they wipe his knowladge of it from his brain then send him through the stargate home.After about 3 weeks the young is mature and will either brake out of the chest or take over the body and become a spy.


dont worry by end of next week when ive not got flu ill be able to make this sound awsome

[Elite Anubis Guard]

Sounds interesting, although a little tip of advice I picked up from gateworld. Even though forums are relaxed and casual places, when talking about your own creations, it doesnt hurt to use a correct grammar.

[romus]

well u can blame my old school for that it was like the worst in england

[Elite Anubis Guard]

Not trying to discourage or anything, but it does cast doubts upon how the grammar in your series will be.

[romus]

i have 3 other people ready to start writing and they are good with grammer so ill let them do most of the typing

[Elite Anubis Guard]

Ah, so you'll be more like a director.

[romus]

yep im the 1 who came up with the idea and will be overlooking what the writers are doing lol

[romus]

i had a good idea for the destiny stargate but destiny maker said no so ill use it on exodus

[Elite Anubis Guard]

You can suggest it and well have to see how it could fit in for season2.

[romus]

i have suggested it to destiny maker and he said no becouse the stargates in the new galaxy are not made to go to other galaxys

[Geoff]

wait, what? I said that the gates in the ORION galaxy were specifically made to be unable to dial other outside the galaxy, and unable to be dialed from outside the galaxy.